He suddenly jolted his head and glared at the street sign. Ladbroke Grove. The abrupt turn of his head was almost predatory-like, closely mimicking a carnivorous animal picking out the scent of it’s next kill. His athletic posture and towering height instantly manifested a sense of superiority within him, emphasized by the uneasy looks that other individuals were imposing towards him. He was sporting an immaculately white shirt, which contrasted the colour of his skin and arms, that were overshadowed by large bursting veins, that chaotically meandered underneath the surface of his skin.
Finn W 
You chose an excellent range of sensory language along with various impressive metaphors. Well done.
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This description in insane! I can clearly visualise the character because of the words and phrases you used. WOW
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I like the way you described Mr.Bugzy, you described his body language and how it made you feel. The way you described his emotions in relation to your emotions was epic games.
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